Many people say that young people today are worse than what they were in the past. In contrast, not many people say that young people today are better. For me, I don’t want to compare teenagers today with teenagers in the past and I think young people today have both good and bad points.
Today there is a lot of high technology, and much of it provides teenagers some experiences and knowledge, which they cannot find in the classroom. Teenagers today have a lot of opportunity to learn and to provide themselves with some knowledge. If teenagers want to find some information about anything, they can find it in the internet, which allows them to see the information from all around the world. This means that young people today have a chance to learn what they want.
On the other hand, some young people today are addicted to alcohol, and this causes many accidents and some fighting. When one gets drunk, one cannot control him or herself. Many teenagers say they know about the bad things from alcohol, so they would not drink it or if they did, they would control their selves. However, from my experience, teenagers try not to drink alcohol, but when you are addicted to something, you usually can’t control yourself. Their knowledge can’t help them to stop drinking alcohol.
Moreover, some young people today both girls and boys usually spend a lot of money on clothes, jewelry and make up. Although all these things are expensive, teenagers can buy them because their parents give them the money. They can buy what they want so they don’t really know the worth of money.
Although young people today have both good and bad points, in my opinion, we can be better. We have lot of technology and opportunity to learn and to find new good experiences; nevertheless, many teenagers, including me, haven’t used them in all these advantages yet.
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I agreed with your idea about young people today. Young people today have two sides, the good and the bad way. I think that it was good that you did not compare teenagers today with the teenagers in the past because the society now and in the past in a lot different. Therefore, if the society is not the same, so the teenagers could change too. It was great to know about your idea, Bam.
Oh! Wow! Your essay is long. However, I read it.
You wrote about teenagers have both good and bad points, that I agree with you. I think that‘s good idea when you herald about opinion of general people. In addition, you wrote about your opinion is a big part of your essay. You can write cover of this topic, “What are Thai teenagers being?”
You wrote good point and bad point of Thai teenagers are balance, which I and another reader can received the information about Thai teenagers now. That is good.
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